Writing Task 1:Writing an Email

Writing Task 1:Writing an Email

Write an email as You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements.

Write an email to the college authorities in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

- Explain what you like about the cafeteria

- Say what is wrong with it

- Suggest how it could be improved

 

Dear College Administration,

I'm writing to offer criticism of the college cafeteria. I would like to express my gratitude for the availability of inexpensive and practical meals for students as a frequent user of the cafeteria during lunch. However, I do think there is room for development.

Although there are many different food options available in the cafeteria, the food's quality and flavour could be improved.

Food has frequently been served that was either undercooked, overcooked, or simply not as fresh as it should have been. Additionally, there are often uncomfortable seating arrangements, and it is challenging to find a seat during busy times.

I would suggest the following modifications to enhance the cafeteria experience:

  • The cafeteria staff is responsible for making sure the food is prepared and served at the proper temperature and standard.
  • To accommodate more students, the seating arrangements should be increased.
  • Vegetarian and vegan options should be available in the cafeteria, along with healthier menu options.
  • To make the meals more affordable for students, the prices should be changed.

In order to improve the cafeteria experience for students, I hope that my suggestions will be taken into account and the necessary adjustments made.

I appreciate your consideration of this issue.

Sincerely,

ABC

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