Writing Task 1:Writing an Email

Writing Task 1:Writing an Email

Write an email as There have been some problems with public transportation in your area recently

Write a letter to the management of the public transport company in about 150-200 words. In your letter describe the problems:

- Explain how these problems are affecting the public.

- Suggest some changes that could be made.

 

Dear XYZ,

I am writing to provide feedback on your company's public transportation services. While I appreciate your organization's efforts to provide the public with affordable and convenient transportation options, I believe there are some areas that require improvement.

The issue of overcrowding on buses and trains during rush hours is one of the most significant problems. This not only causes passengers inconvenience, but it also poses a safety risk. Numerous commuters are required to stand for extended periods of time, frequently in uncomfortable and crowded conditions.

In addition, there are frequent service delays and cancellations, which can be aggravating for commuters who rely on public transportation to get to work, school, or other important obligations. This can lead to decreased productivity and lost opportunities.

I would like to suggest that the company consider increasing service frequency during peak hours and deploying additional buses and trains to alleviate congestion. In addition, it may be advantageous to improve communication channels in order to keep passengers informed of delays and cancellations, as well as to offer alternative transportation options when necessary.

I hope you will consider these suggestions and work to improve the quality and dependability of your public transportation services. Thank you for your time and consideration regarding this issue.

Regards, 

ABC

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